2) balanced design 1st slide
3) agenda missing
4) agenda as a translation of presentation objectives
5) don't write what you don't fully understand: "Pokemon is a franchise" (smaller company)
6) enrich the picture: "9 people in Tokyo basement drawing comics"
7) good use of visuals
8) what are pokemon? do not use paragraph; if you explain levels, use schemes; enrich: from outer space? what is anime? (do not assume people understand terms: it is TV series)
9) what is pallet town?
10) starter pokemon? (do not mention it before slide explaining it)
11) no paragraphs
12) no objectives of Pokemon. Game? plot?
13) ah...there is comic, anime/cartoon, game
14) good: standing and limited movement, stage control, usage of hands, voice
15) 3 regions: role, dogs/birds protect regions
16) Disadvantages and advantages (of what?): example of fire (17 more)
17) what is a pokeball and types? (and for what)
18) gym leader: compete against the Elite Four in gamess or Pokemon League in the anime?
19) generation VI? it is one of the regions?
3) agenda missing
4) agenda as a translation of presentation objectives
5) don't write what you don't fully understand: "Pokemon is a franchise" (smaller company)
6) enrich the picture: "9 people in Tokyo basement drawing comics"
7) good use of visuals
8) what are pokemon? do not use paragraph; if you explain levels, use schemes; enrich: from outer space? what is anime? (do not assume people understand terms: it is TV series)
9) what is pallet town?
10) starter pokemon? (do not mention it before slide explaining it)
11) no paragraphs
12) no objectives of Pokemon. Game? plot?
13) ah...there is comic, anime/cartoon, game
14) good: standing and limited movement, stage control, usage of hands, voice
15) 3 regions: role, dogs/birds protect regions
16) Disadvantages and advantages (of what?): example of fire (17 more)
17) what is a pokeball and types? (and for what)
18) gym leader: compete against the Elite Four in gamess or Pokemon League in the anime?
19) generation VI? it is one of the regions?
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